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Ahh I can see how that works. I would get it more if you capitalized words like %u201CRock%u201D because that would make me think of Jesus who is our Rock, ...

Thanks for the review, Kaia! Really appreciate it as always :D

Thank you for your review! Cheers!

Thank you so much for your review! Glad you enjoyed it :D (Side note: I had no idea what was going in my mind that made the last stanza so ...

Thank you for your review and encouragements! :D I randomly made this poem out of a prompt I saw called "Hand". And then I thought of this suspense, somewhat grotesque ...

Thank you for your review! This line "While going home when the sky%u2019s black." means going home at night time. Not just evening, but night time or even during midnight. ...

Thank you so much! (I actually almost forgot about my short stories since I'm just doing random poems nowadays...might write another story one day) Glad you enjoy the story! :D

Ohh alright! That makes it more abstract HAHAHA but still niceee

And welcome to YWS too!

Nice that someone saw this as a meme! HAHAHA (that's the reason I added the touch grass phrase) I'm glad the poem helped you reflect, just as how it helped ...

You're welcome! Keep writing :D

not the camerasss huhuhu I have to agree such things we don't expect are getting more and more common...

Thank you so much for your review and the kind words! Thank you for taking the time to review my work, too :D I do agree that people have different ...

I love when people give new perspectives that I've never thought off to my poems. Just like how you suggested, Sometimes in life, people will block everything else out, though ...

Thanks for the review! And regarding the sun, whether it's in game or not, it's the actual real sun as mentioned in the last line of that stanza "If I ...