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Re: 1st grade boy
Hello! Ah the sorrows that usually come with first love. It's something that many are all too familiar with. Which is why many would be reluctant to love and others ...
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Re: Chapter Three: Something Bigger, Something Brighter
This does look like an action film alright. And a 18+ one at that. There's a reason you put every trigger warning on this and rightly so. Thank you for ...
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Re: Dark Flare Chapter 2 - pt 1 ~ 2
Cool! Chapter 2 :D One note before I start, it's great how you're posting your chapters regularly because I do mine so slowly HAHAHA anyways On to the review of ...
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Re: i'm the ashes falling into the tray
Hello! Now here is an interesting little poem. Short, longing, and somewhat desperate. Let’s dive into the review! (Pardon the grammatical inconsistencies; using another gadget is tough HAHHA) im th
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Re: The Last Spell 20.1
Hello! I have returned to give your lovely work another review. (cue the awkward bowing). Let's proceed with the review! “There’s something else here,” Kaja muttered, bending down behind the ...
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Re: The Last Spell 18.1
Hello! I came to stumble upon your work and give you a review. So I'll be reviewing your work by parts I find interesting or parts I find crucial to ...
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Re: Dust Storm: Chapters 27-28
This is based on those poems from experiences, I believe? Words like the Pit, games like Gaga ball, and themes like friendship are recurring in both. Alright! Let me review ...
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Re: Chapter 3
Wow! This is one of a kind chapter. The last part made me deathly uncomfortable, because of the implications around it. Let's go into the review! General overview: I like ...
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Re: Dark Flare Chapter 1 - part 1
Alright! This surely looks like an interesting and great start to the story! This is alpacaboss and, hey! Welcome to YWS! Glad you're posting stuff already. I tend to vary ...
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Re: Emerald - Chapter 1
Hello! I love how you plan to make this a children's fantasy book. As someone who has experience with writing stuff for children (and was admittedly had a Geronimo Stilton ...
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Re: LC Excerpt 3 part 3
Hello! I've come back to leave another review. :D I see this is a lot longer than the previous one I reviewed so please bear with me if I mess ...
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Re: I Knew Chapter 29
I can't believe I didn't go straight to this after reading chapter 28. Anyways let's goooo Sheriff Edwards leaned forward and folded his hands on his knees. “I’m not allowed ...
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Re: I Knew Chapter 19
Hello! Right after reading chapter 18, I hoped on right here. I'm finally reviewing a long novel in chronological order for the first (maybe last) time. wooooo Let's get right ...
Jul 4, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 18
Hello! I'm here to leave a short review. I know I'm jumping from chapter to chapter so sorry for that huhuhu. Hopefully, I'll be able to read the whole thing ...
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Re: An Irresistible Cape
Hello! Alpacaboss here. This is a great poem that discovers an interesting side of love by posing the question, "Would you continue loving someone even if they turned into a ...
Jul 4, 2023
