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This simply one of the most darkest poems I have ever read! I have to say that you have definitely captured a haunting element that kept me on the edge ...

Thanks June, you always like to lend your thoughts :) But this poem was just written specifically for my boy hahaha. Thank you. It wasn't meant for people to look ...

Thanks for the reviews cee17 and lifeblood! Cee17, I'm glad you appreciate the imagery. the whole thing pretty much wrote out as like all one big ball of love and ...

Thank you very much janedoe. Imagery just happens with a lot of things I do. I'm really glad you like the fearless part. The tree is just part of the ...

That was nice. What sound are you planning for this?

Is this an original? It sounds way too similar to a movie I saw last year. I'm just asking And why didn't the other people walk with him down the ...

Thanks for reading Ayumi and fragile heart.

Thanks Dominique I'm glad you like it! Its nice to hear your take on it-- inspirational and boundless :)

Hiya! I'm Rosey and I'll be your reviewer for today. This poem took me some time to understand completely, I'm still not sure I do, but the feel is mostly ...

Thanks for reviewing Kaiden!! I might go back to it when I have time. But I just really like this poem

I read the second poem you wrote and I can say, that you don't belong to average people. I totally appreciate that comment. And Thanks Macs and Christine. Any more ...

This whole stanza feels vague, shallow, and, it's kind of all over the place. My immediate reaction was "... what?" Part of it I think has to do with those ...

it kind of had a Colbie Callait (probably spelled that wrong... :)) vibe to it. I liked it. [quote="Babanuuk"]it reminds me of some indie, bluesy artists. Jack Johnson ish , ...

Thanks for the reviews. :) I like this, is the style rap??? Anyway you want to make sure you keep it far enough away from the songs that inspired it ...

Thanks everyone. I'll put more thought into editing if I decide to keep working on this. Any more reviews? That would be helpful.