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  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: What is the Best Movie you have seen...

    I am a big Harry potter fan. But the best movie I have ever seen is ''The Blind Side'' starting Sandra Bullock. It is an amazing movie. It is based ...

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Historical Fiction, Dramatic Re: The End

    Hey there SharpHost!! I liked the essay, I will review it as I read again, Sentence by sentence. ''caved in cheeks and hollowed eye sockets'' I really liked how you ...

    Jan 11, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, General Re: life of an Indian teenager

    Hey AkankshaD, A teenager from India here. I will be pointing out errors as I read your essay. 'amajor ' you missed to put a space. :) it is okay. ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: What If....

    Hey there Snazzy! I just commented on your 'homework' poem. Pretty good work over here. My eyes cannot find a flaw, maybe the poem should have included more incidents and ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Goldfish

    Hey Aleta! This a one of those poems that makes you happy sad (happy and sad at the same time) I really like the way the poem goes. I have ...

    Jan 10, 2017
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Mass molestation in Bengaluru, India

    shivamriky, Thank you for writing on the topic. I really appreciate the time and effort you have put into this. Women and men should come together and work for a ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: My Parallel

    Morrigun, This poem was really beautiful. I really appreciate poems that rhyme, because poems that don't, don't really go with the flow for me. I love how you described the ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: I Left My Heart

    WHOA!! I LOVE THIS! Girl! This poem is amazing. Now I envy you!! I wish this was written by me! I love the way it rhymes, even the half rhymes ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: (Obsesive)(OBsessive) Obessive (CoMpulsive)(coompulsive) Compulsive...

    It is an interesting poem. Now I do feel I have an OCD about certain things. It is at times scary about how perfect I want certain thinks to be. ...

    Jan 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Love Doesn't Always Work Out

    Wow! Just wow! Your poem is very well structured and it rhymes pretty well. The first two lines of each stanza are very intense and powerful. Well, good and flood ...

    Dec 27, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: dawn

    This poem is nice. Personally I find it very difficult to write poems that are free verse, it is impossible for me. I would have liked it more if the ...

    Dec 27, 2016


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