albedo

I like this and I think you did a great job on this. I saw a few minor writing mistakes that you could fix like for example the line, "he ...

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Hello! This poem hit me like a ton of bricks. The implications here are devastating. This is some great stuff! I like that you didn’t go with obvious metaphors. The ...

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Hello! This is a very neat story! The plot of this story is intriguing, yet the lack of proper conjunctions makes it difficult to follow along. I really like your ...

Hello! This is a very neat story! I really like the journal entry format of this story. It works very well for stories like this. Though, I don’t find the ...

Hello! This is a really neat story. The writing is amazing, I don't see any grammar mistakes here. This piece made me feel many things. I like how it went ...

Hello! This is a really neat story. I like your use of descriptive words. The topic is one that I don't think I've ever seen before which is cool! I ...

Hello! This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. I really enjoyed your characters, especially Alice who is very ...

Hello! This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions for example-- "To the right was a huge bed - ...

Hello! This is a really neat story. I love your use of big words! I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. This chapter took ...

Hello! Just a few errors that I would like to point out. "the race that took after their Goddess in purest form." The word 'The' should be before the word ...

Hello! Just a few small errors I would like to point out-- "Certainly nobody sensible, be it family or the police." There should be a comma after the word Certainly. ...