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Hey there, Firedancer here to review your errr lovely poem. Just a quick note but I really like your avatar. Very cute and comical ^-^ I feel as if you ...

Hey there Spinelli, this is Firedancer here to review your poetry work. "There is the Sun, turning on and off," I like how you referenced the sun to a light ...

Hey, it's Firedancer here to review your poem! I like the beginning of your poem the quote "Anyone tired of their identity? I'm currently looking to trade." I think that ...

Hey Firedancer here to review your lovely poem! Okay first thing first. This poem had a very flowing feel to it in my opinion. The first half of the poem ...

Wow. This piece of writing has left me speechless. This is... phenomenal. It is so emotionally charged, that it almost brought me to tears. You should seriously consider submitting this ...

Hey its Firedancer here to do your review. Already from your writing style I can tell you are a beginner. I shall start with the grammatical way of things. “Then ...

Hey, Firedancer here to do a review on your literary work! I can immediately tell that you are a seasoned writer, and that I'll be hard-pressed to find any errors. ...

Hey, it's Firedancer here and I'm going to do a review of your work. be warned it is mostly grammatical errors I will report. "The Circus Trio, never losing its ...

This is basically just going to be a praise review. First off your writing style is superb. It's very natural and easy to read. I didn't find a lot of ...

Its Firedancer here, and I'm going to review your story. First thing first, may I tell you that you have an amazing writing style? Third person limited omniscience, because that's ...

This is a very funny story, I love it! The way that you've made the Harleminthine Shactora Virus seem very plausible and believable, just adds that much more credential to ...

Sorry did not say it was a review the first time so here it is as a review. :) Okay first thing first, I absolutely love this story idea! It ...