alabasterwolveness

This is a nice piece, I just have a few things that I would like to talk to you about. "They are coming from everywhere To turn you into one ...

This piece is really nice, I got so into it. I can actually see what you are telling us! I love the way the piece ends! I would of never ...

Hey there, there can be a lot of meaning to this poem. Though it is very short, it can mean a lot of things such as you are tired of ...

Hey there! Names Alabaster and I will be reviewing this today or well this morning. Now, I really do like your style of writing, its sweet and kind all at ...

Hey there! First off I'd like to say the poem was a little different. I like the difference in it, but I do have a few problems with the poem.... ...

I agree with Snoink, I don't really get this piece at all. There are a lot of question's that you left unanswered. Whats neat back in 1983? Does it have ...

Hey there! How are you? Good I hope this poem isn't about you! Its very neatly written, you have a few good points in here, I couldn't really find much ...

Hey there! Nice to meet you, Ill review your work today! Please don't take anything I say too seriously because I don't mean to be rude. I just review hard ...

wow, this is really nice. I love it, it's very inspirational. I like how deep this is written, your style is different than what I have read. Which is very ...

Alright, here's a tip. That is way to short! I don't even understand what you are trying to say. It's different yes, but give it more depth. Otherwise the reader ...

It was dark and stormy night, I was drowning in my own mind. I submerged quicker and deeper; Into my own incomprehensible mind. I was searching for an answer, Why ...

Hey there! Wanted to say I liked the poem, it spoke to me as I read it. It was very moving, but the spacing did throw me off just a ...

Hey there! Name is Randi or Alabaster. Please don't take offense if I go into detail when I'm reviewing your work.If you want, you can always message me and we ...

Hiya! Well Here it is, there was emtion but really it seemed like you were thinking with your brain's emotions instead of your hearts. Kind of see what I mean? ...

Hey! I was in agony then. I was chained to many walls, unable to be free. Their incessant chatter brought nothing but torment to myself. And then one final day ...