aimlesswanderer

Hey, I liked this because it was different with the perfect amount of sarcasm. There's a few sentences however that may need some slight changes. The doorbell tinkled, and Joann ...

Hey, I really enjoyed this chapter. Your descriptions of his routine helped readers understand more about him then that he is a boy who goes to a coffee shop. " ...

I love your poem, but there's a few things I thought just stood out. When thy eyes touched mine For the very first time I knew it would be forever ...

Hey, I'm going to post a quick reply, okay? Okay, I'll admit I clicked on to this page thinking 'oh great another love story where a girl doesn't want to ...

Hey, I loved this conversation it was a great way to start off the story. The adverbs you used really helped the words flow, and you did a great job ...

Hey, That's a great way to start, and it's so true. It sounds so real and blunt, and that's what makes it interesting. I loved it, but there is one ...

Hey, i am new so sorry if I mess this up. I find it hard to believe that, as many gurus say we are made stronger by our disappointments. To ...

I really liked your story, but here are some things that I think you need to change. In this story a young girl about the age of 13 found what ...

You have found “love” again And it hurts to see That another victim has given in When she sits on your knee All I think about is, when it was ...

I really enjoyed the story. Liz's comments really made me think, and my heart just went out to your characters. I think Liz is very original I've never read another ...