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Re: Fallen Angels~Chapter 2
That was cool. I liked the fight scene. This is good so far. Tell me when the next Installation comes out :D
May 10, 2008 -
Re: The nerd in the sweater
I wrote it off the cusp. Its terrible I know.
May 5, 2008 -
Re: May I Have This Dance
This was very poetic.I would say that you were very educated. Love the connections with the seasons and space. This is a keeper. :D
May 4, 2008 -
Re: Dimension of Music
I like your poem. It has a vibrant feel to it. The ending nailed it. It sound like you have passion for your instrument.
Apr 30, 2008 -
Re: America is the world
Sorry, but because of my political views, I dislike this poem greatly. How can the USA be great with an idiot in office?
Apr 28, 2008 -
Re: (RUNAWAY) Chapter One: Paralyzed * title subject to change
I loveed it. This had the right amount of info to get someone hooked and not so much that the reader is bored. Skye seems like she is suffering from ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Accident
A romantic death. Deep and sexy at the same time. This was a great poem. Good imagry. It makes you think.
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: For you were and will always be
Touching. I loved this. You seem like a good friend.
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Dido's Sonnet
Oh the Fates are godessess that figure out how long someone's going to live, when they are going to die, their future, etc.
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: My First Suitor
I loved this poem and the poem before. Are you a hopeless romantic, if so join my group TRC, we can totally help you. The review, I liked this poem. ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Soup Kitchen
That was deep. This is one of these meaningful poems that make people think about their lives. Gadi., more people need to think like you. I loved this poem. It's ...
Apr 27, 2008 -
Re: Lies (rewritten)
I liked this. It has good imagry and a nice rythmn to it. I like the fact there is sorta a patten with the lines. Overall good job!
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Suffocating
I liked this. Try using a thesorus to vary your words.
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: Better Views
I liked this. Don't change a thing.
Apr 26, 2008 -
Re: And Ariel smiled at me,
I don't get it. That all I can say.
Apr 26, 2008
