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Hey! Adele here :) First of all, as many others said in their comments, the imagery and metaphors in your poem are delightful. I think you could expand on this ...

Hi! Adele here :) I definitely appreciate the tone and message behind this piece - I have certainly felt similar emotions toward one I loved very deeply. Just a few ...

Hi! Adele here :) I want to start by saying that your writing is seriously gorgeous. I love this poem. That said, the first half feels a bit ambiguous - ...

I really enjoyed your poem! I found the structure very effective, and I like that your last stanza is shorter than the others. It succeeds in packing a punch. Also, ...

Hey! I enjoyed your poem - short but sweet. It has a very strong rhythm and your rhyming is perfect! The topic is also so relevant right now :) The ...

Hey! What a wonderful piece! I love the sense of acceptance--and not unhappy or unsatisfied acceptance, but peaceful and contented acceptance. That said, I'm in a somewhat picky mood . ...

Okay, here we go. Overall, I really like your poem and the ideas behind it. However, I think refining/clearing up some of the language could take your poem from good ...

This is such a deep short story - it really took me by surprise (and I don't mean that as an insult at all, in case you took it that ...

Wow. This piece is so short and yet so insightful. I love the images it creates (though maybe love isn't the right word - I know life lived like this ...

Hey! There several things that I really like about this poem, one of which being the simple fact that it is not immediately clear what is going on in it. ...

I really enjoyed reading your poem! It flows very well, due partly to both your repetition (which works very well) and the way you were conscious of sticking to your ...

Hey! This is an absolutely stunning piece. The imagery not only creates a beautiful image in my mind, but it also holds so much emotion. I particularly enjoyed the contrast ...

Hey! This poem is beautifully written. I love the evolution that occurs within it--from a somewhat negative outlook to a positive, more optimistic one that looks toward the future. Your ...

Hey! Good job with this poem! It is well-written and leaves me both satisfied and wanting to know more (though I suppose that is the trademark of a good poem). ...

This is such a beautiful piece of writing and the emotion that radiates from it is so intense that I can't decide whether I want to never read it again ...