abdullah786

I wrote it from Narcissus's point of view - by trying to put on his shoes. The first stanza describes the pond or lake that Narcissus was looking into and ...

"Until I'm satisfied" is what "my fill" means. I won't explain it further! Lol I like to keep some mystery to my work! Don't mind lol.

I tried to add a lot of dark themes to the poem, they include necrophilia, excessive drug consumption, sadism and amputee fetishism. The line you quoted is the necrophilia part. ...

Thanks. I was a bit depressed when I wrote this story, so I might have skipped some mistakes. About the descriptions, I like to add a poetic touch for the ...

Your story has many occasional bumps. Sometimes, a part becomes so interesting that you can't stop reading, while at times it becomes pretty boring. You have to keep the interest ...

I don't get it, there's no really theme of your story and you have admitted it... I have deduced - and this is only my opinion - that you're in ...

It's a nice story. However you need to improve on these things: 1. Grammar and punctuation. On numerous occasions you have replaced the comma before the inverted commas (in the ...