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  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My Story.

    Woah! I can feel you really poured your heart out in here. I won't write a review 'cause I feel bad doing so. This work seems too personal and full ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 2 - Charms

    Hi! Thanks for the review! I will surely consider your points. ^_^

    Oct 31, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: "The Necklace" Continuation

    Woah there! This is a very good continuation of the story. I like the creativity of your imagination. There are just some typos in your story but overall this is ...

    Oct 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 2 - Charms

    Hi! Thanks for the review and for some suggestions. I'll consider them in my story for improvement. ^_^

    Oct 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 1 - A Heavenly Creature

    Hey guys! I wanted so bad to reply to all your comments and reviews but I do lack of time right now. Haha! I'm so sorry. So, I'll make it ...

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 1 - A Heavenly Creature

    Hi! Thank you very much for the comments and review! I do appreciate it! :D I already edited the points you mentioned. As for the date of the next chapter, ...

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Tragic Tale: Chapter 1 - A Heavenly Creature

    Hi! Thanks for the review! I just realized it has a lot of typos and I'm glad you pointed them out. :D Your questions about the characters will be answered ...

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Tragic Tale: Prologue - The Unfortunate

    Yay! Thanks a lot! But, I'm too busy right now to add more chapters. I have them in my files though. Hehe!

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: A Tragic Tale: Prologue - The Unfortunate

    Hey! Thank you so much for the reviews! I would not notice those mistakes myself. Thanks for pointing them out. :D

    Aug 18, 2013
  • Script » General, General Re: What Is Love?

    I didn't really read the full essay. I only had read the beginning, middle, and end, and by judging from it, I could see it is a beautiful story. Thumbs ...

    Jan 8, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: pavements

    Wow! I like the words you used and the rhythm of your poem :) Thumbs up! Keep writing. Thanks for the poem, by the way.

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Mother's Tears

    I like your poem. It was well-written. The words you used were just appropriate for the poem touched my heart. It was so endearing. I love its meaning and the ...

    Dec 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sky

    I like your poem. The words you used were simple which were better. I find no flaws. I just don't know if my eyes didn't see. Thumbs up! Keep writing ...

    Nov 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Perfect Girl

    Wow! I like your poem - truly touching and full of emotions. I love how you chose your words which makes your poem so alive. Thumbs up! xD Keep writing ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    I like it! The poem was so touching! I won't criticize your work anymore since I find it really good! Thumbs up! Keep writing :)

    Sep 5, 2011


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