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I did like the series, although I can sum up my feelings for each book with one word per book: 1st: good, 2nd: Meh, 3rd: AWESOME. For those of you ...

Woah. :shock: That was freaky. Only one problem I spotted: you used the wrong form of 'your.' The one you used is the conjuction of 'you are,' but other than ...

I noticed that this is your only post, so let me be the first to say welcome to YWS! :D Um, however, there is one rule here... You have to ...

I like it. :D There's only one typo that I spotted--"theif" is spelled "thief"--and I would take out the last sentence in the ninth paragraph merely because it's kinda superfluous ...

There's nothing wrong with this content-wise, but your grammar needs some work. No spaces before commas or periods, and you're also using the wrong form of "there." (It should be ...

:shock: ...That was unexpected. I love the way you conveyed your character's last moments... I'm going to guess that the rest of the story will be everything leading up to ...

I like it already! I love fantasy fiction that doesn't seem like a fantasy from the offset... no magic, prophesies, or demons in the first chapter! That has to be ...

I completely disagree with the above posts. You guys have obviously never had your hearts broken before, and yeah, as cliched as it sounds, that is what it feels like. ...

You reviewed my story, so now I'll return the favor! I agree with Jiggity; you have a great basis for a story here. However, the background information at the beginning ...

I agree with Snoink about the dialogue grammar. That definetely needs to be tweaked a bit. Other than that, I rather liked it, except for the fact that the urgency ...

Wow, that gave me the chills. The good kind, I mean. That was a really great story! I think that it was the perfect balance between surreal and reality and ...

*stares at above comment* We'll just ignore him. :wink: I loved this piece... It should have won! :( What did I do during lunch and recess? Where did I go ...

Props for posting in the Fanfiction forum. Nobody gets any love over here, and my own fanfiction is sadly being ignored. :( Anyway... I found the ending more interesting than ...

I liked it, but there are several issuses with punctuation. For example: Other than that only the cats went up for the rats, and Brittany could never figure out how ...

I am SO happy that someone actually wrote this. I live in atown were 99% of the people are VERY conservative, and a lot of the kids that I go ...