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Yay episode 2 All dressed up he headed to the kitchen to make his favorite breakfast. Two sunny side up eggs with a strip of bacon making a smiley face ...

Hey, Zoom here for a review. Interesting concept. I wonder how you can expand on this to the proportions of a novel. “Jesus, can I just have one more moment ...

Hello. Zoom here for a review. Just want to say that, even though I will be pointing out a lot of things I found wrong, I think you have a ...

Zoom here for a review. I don't usually read or review short stories but the A/N convinced me. I sat down at my seat in history class, next to my ...

Zoom here for . . . a . . . what is up with that A/N? I almost want to review that more than the story . . . Telling ...

Woah. That was pretty good. Great voice, great flow, just great. It reads more like an opening chapter than a prologue, but who cares really. I'm very intrigued. You've done ...

Hey, Zoom here for a review. I just want to say before you read my review, I am going to point out a few problems but I see a lot ...

Hello. Zoom here for a review. The reason I was intrigued to read this is mostly due to your A/N mentioning marvel/dc inspiration. Also, I enjoy the subject choice, usually ...

Hello. Zoom here for a review. Firstly, I just wanted to commend you for writing this well using a secondary language. I did notice a lot of spelling mistakes, grammar ...

"That sounded like a person!" She exclaims. "We have to go help!" I nod in agreement. They need help. "I'll call the police." I add as I dial. You don’t ...

Hello. I read this through and have some feedback to share with you. I can go into more detail about my points if needed. Azrael was I think it's weak ...

Hello! I read this through and have some feedback to share with you. Right at the beginning, the description of the room reads like a laundry list. It's forgettable and ...

Dawn broke over the trees, sending soft rays of milky golden light cascading over the forest. The stars, faintly glittering in the sky, were slowly fading away to the rose ...

This is difficult to read due to how often you switch tenses: Present: On top of the carriage is a woman wearing a large cloak Past: On the other side ...

A fair boy in his late teens was sitting in a blue comfy chair, his blue eyes staring widely at the screen of the laptop, his long slender fingers wrapped ...