Ziggy

I agree with what Aley said. Yes, sometimes having a bunch of different characters makes the story more exciting, but with more characters comes more responsibility, and knowing how to ...

I am not going to make a long review, so this'll just be a sec. I like this series you having going on. It's alright. But you seem to be ...

I'm going to try to cover as much as I can. From start to finish. "An odd for of Tangle, the Word- Weaver..." and "Bone- Weaver...". In both of these ...

Okay, time for some reality. First off-capitalization. If you aren't capitalizing every first word, don't capitalize any. Second-try to actually take time, and think about the difference between 'o' a

Lets start. This brings so much emotion to the table. It just makes you step back and say "Woah". This is just a great poem. I love the way you ...

Okay, lets start here. Your punctuation. You need to fix periods in ""I just got home from school." I reply nervously." You don't need the period after school. And you ...

I agree with what Kuyerjudd said. This definitely needs verse format. You really should put this in verses, because your readers will have trouble reading something crammed together. Moving on, ...

I am going to try to hit on as much as I can. So, I like your variety of words. Many people might not understand, but I think I understand ...

This leaves many questions. It was good, I hope you expand on it. But I don't have a clear understanding of whats going on. Maybe you mean't for that. I ...