Zexal42

Thank you for reviewing not got any questions but your review was very helpful as I'll admit I am not exactly great at writing but I'll now be looking through ...

Thanks like I said first poem but I need advice like this to improve so thx.

When I read the description I didn't know what to think 'taste you' that sounds wrong but I was pleasantly surprised keep it up.

Hey great poem but if you have any bad habits you want to get rid of I recommend using habitica it is an rpg styled task completer but back to ...

Great poem I loved how you described bad memories as living in a place called 'left field' as it really examined people's way of describing what they think bad memories ...

This is a really good summary of the plot of The Little Mermaid (however told in a poetic way). 1. First of all, though we get a description of the ...

A short (though seemingly unfinished) poem. 1.The way you describe the moon and the sun like a duet is a great way of talking about them but you can add ...

Hey. The imagery of the poem is great at engaging me to read on. The words used we great though you happen to sometimes repeat words a lot. There could ...

The words used are perfect for this type of poem you are writing. The last stanza doesn't really seem to rhyme that well though maybe I am wrong. There could ...