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Hey, This was so sad but interesting. I didn't know who the narrator was until the very last part. If you did that intentionally great job because I assumed that ...

Hey, This is very deep and well thought out. I'm very glad you shared it. it seems like it means something to you. I feel like you wrote this about ...

Hey, So this was very sad but almost peaceful n a way. I really like the tone overall. I have a younger brother and I couldn't even comprehend losing him. ...

Hey, So this was interesting but odd. I really don't see the point of the story. Nothing really happens and I don't really understand why you mention all of this ...

Hey, So this is a very cute story and the concept is just adorable. I really enjoyed reading this and it kind of felt like a John Green book wrapped ...

Hey, Thanks for letting me know about this. It was short but got to point well. It didn't feel rushed. But with that I would suggest splitting up the paragraphs ...

Hey, Oh no about the little kids and her sister. Great way to end a chapter with action and a cliff hanger. This was great the characters seemed to be ...

Hey, so this is a very interesting concept you have here. Aliens watching the earth come to life. It's a really cool idea. They're are some problems with this but ...

Hey, So first things first. I really like how this is written. the character has so much guilt for what he has done and it really show how good of ...

Well shit, Yeah I'm here again. But the James I have read was not like this and this is a different side. he is torn and it's kinda sad. Poor ...

Hey, Yeah apparently I will just review everything you have in the green room okay. So Thomas is a savage! Like damn that guy just doesn't care does he. Well ...

Hey, So I read your earlier chapter and noticed as well as the other reviewer that the narrator as changed and i like this. It gives a different perspective on ...

Hey, seems like I'm here to review another one of your pieces. I do have to say I like this one much better than the last. Maybe it's because of ...

Hey, I thought this was cute. I don't know what anime this is from so if you could tell me that would be great. I don't ever review poetry because ...

Thank god the little baby is okay! Well This was a good way for this to end. It was a good a ending. I do have to say more future ...