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aww, it makes it sound like we've broken friends or I'm dead or something. I really do love this, who knew you could write poetry eh? amazing, but maybe even ...

Can I just say to Ofir, when you put that you didn't think Miriam Hannah understood how dark the holocaust was, I think that she can understand it. This story ...

Unlike the last chapter I can't find anything other than the above that I would change. I am getting a little worried though. As I put on your last chapter, ...

Okay, i just have to say Anonymous-A , I think that comment was a bit ridiculous. Sure I'm not a guy but I don't agree with what you say about ...

I loved this poem, and as the above review you can tell its from a child's point of view. The only thing I would say your consistent in that fact. ...

I think you need to separate this into verses for one, but thats something basic that should really be done with all poems with this rhyming pattern. And just one ...

This got better half way through, I only understood it till the end though. I think you could have written that in nearly half the words and had a better ...

Hi, I know you asked me to comment on this chapter so I will. I have to say I think you deserve a proper review from me by now, so ...

Hi, just giving you a quick review ‘This is the tale of the mysterious and immortal freedom fighter ninja comma known only by the name whispered on bated breath during ...

I liked this story, it was quite simplistic in its lauguage but captivating as well. The only thing I would say that it would be nice to have some description ...

Firstly I would just like to say I did like this piece alot, it drew me in very quickly and I couldn't keep my eyes of the page but there ...

Hi Kat, just giving you a review. Firstly I would just like to say that Mr Patterson's Emporium of Reading Delights, I know what you based this around but I ...

A good story, I just read your story "I need you to write" and thought that it was your only writing style but clearly its not. “Want to come play ...

Better than the last chapter. I do really like this story, which makes it hard to write anything constructive. You ended this chapter well with "Objects which I could only ...

You definetly still keeping this story above the bar, but this chapter is a little still for me. She is back in the world of corn, seeing of these new ...