Yuriiko

hello there! Congratulations for being featured!! I loved how you portray the man's love to his friend that's why I quoted it.. I know you put friends before boyfriends. That, ...

the best-selling novel. "DEAR JOHN" it's better actually than the movie. It's more interesting and informative about the love between two persons falling in love than of the book.. wahahahah! ...

Wow. How you describe your poem is really nice. Descriptive yet, realistic. How you portray the big, wild ocean to an imperfect life. Deep. But it's really nice. :D Keep ...

Hey, there! You story's short but sweet. You do have the similar idea from the Romeo and Juliet. I thought, while reading, that it was a fairytale story for little ...

I think this is a good poem written by a creative mind of yours!! How you portray and describe your "reasons" are all nice. But kindly look at those repeated ...

oh-oh... hahaha! it's so nice! You let your anger overcome in this poem! There's just this one thing that annoyed me... (don't worry... :D not literally) is how you rarely ...

wow!! I liked it! How you describe love is way creative!! When I first read it at first, I didn't get the poem but when I read and analyzed it... ...

Awww. It was a wonderful poem. Short but sweet and kind of... dark. How you portray the lovers loving each other just for an act to hating each other deeply ...

Wow... i really salute you for that wonderful work of yours. I just have received your comment on one of my piece.. and we have the same concept of story.... ...

This is a nice poem, actually. *applause* but you should be more careful in some of the poem's languages. At first, it was some classical and mythical, both contains myths ...

"Move" or Movie you meant to say in the 4th part?? :D Anyway, your story is nice and romantic. More short stories please :D

"Cause we were both young, when I first saw you..." - Taylor Swift... but are they too young to do something like that when they are still 13? lol.. hahaha ...

there's just this one correction in your poem... please don't forget: But I guess ill move along I guess ill just have to let you date her. It should have ...