Yuriiko

Hello there, watch me burn! This is going to be the first review I am going to give you. So please if ever you this this vague or harsh, I ...

Hello there Kiwi! Here as requested. First of all, I thank you for the good read. The plot itself was interesting and grabbed my attention from the first word until ...

Hello there B-Bird! Here to review. Seeing at those critiques above me, I don't think it's still needed to do a line by line review. So here it goes. First ...

Hello there, Delilah! Here to review. :3 RED in nitpicks. Isaiah was an annoyance to me. For some reason he'd been in my English class Sophomore year and now, my ...

Hello there Pink! Here to review as requested. Since you're Pink, I'll do the nitpicks in that color. :3 His tongue swept over his small fangs as walked back and ...

Hello there! Here to review. Just one thing I've noticed: I can ' t fight much longer Anyways, as to the poem itself, this is really good. The emotions dripping ...

Hello there! Here to review. I think the choppiness you created here is what pulled me in to read this. I think it gives a plausible effect to your poem, ...

Hello there! Here to review. So, you're new huh? I welcome you to The Young Writers Society! *pops confetti* Anyways, how are you doing so far and if you want ...

Hello there, Forest! Here to review. :3 My world is falling apart. And its all because of you. I don't want to love you, But I just can't stop. This ...

Hello there! Here to review. :3 Another second, another minute Another hour, another day Everything's always changing and moving The repetition here is fortunately not annoying and plus, it adds ...

Hello there! Here to review. :3 “I’m sorry Hanna, I just don’t think this is going to work out , ” (Okay, I have learned many things from my critiques ...

Hello there! Here for my second review. Seeing that a lot of good critiques have covered pretty much of the piece, I won't do any more a line by line ...

Hello there Kyou! Here as requested. :3 Nitpicks and suggestions in RED . Selfishly I knew she could have the information I needed, an information that could be a bridge ...

Hello there Crimsona! Here as requested. :3 Comments and suggestions in RED . Chapter One - Days of Glory The trees were swaying slowly in the light breeze. (First of ...

Hello there, SilentRain! Here to review. :3 Corrections in RED . Pulled under by you r touch It's really hard to breath e I know it ' s unwise ~ ...