Yuriiko

Hello there! Here to review. So, I apologize in advance if ever there's going to be a repetition around here or if you might see this review vague. It's because ...

Hello there! Here to review. It feels like melting ice when he looks at me, Perhaps if you could end this stanza with a period not a comma. :3 At ...

Hello there! Here to review. Do you remember When my father He called me I would scrape off the word "he", since it's pretty understandable that you're still referring to ...

Hello there, Jemjive! Here to review. The first thing I've noticed in your poem is that you've kept on capitalizing the first letter of each line, which I think is ...

Hello there! Here to review. :3 So I guess this is fifty percent poem and a half prayer. Anyways, I feel like the poem's all blurry and couldn't relate much ...

Hello there! Here to review. my arms stretched out in front of my so I would have some forewarning before I smashed into anything. It feels lacking. pulsing down my ...

Hello there! Here to review. I'll be pretty honest. Your story has completely threw me off just by reading you introductory line. You tend to jump tenses a bit. Remember, ...

Hello there! Here to review. Except for the wind, the only sounds that we could hear were the sounds of our footsteps on the rough pavement. I would have to ...

Hello there, Angel! Here to review. But since then our friendship grew . I don't think you need a period after the whole line, it's not even forming a sentence, ...

Hello there! Here to review. The flow of the poem is good and so with the concept behind it. However, sometimes the flow is distracted by your commas, although very ...

Hello there, Elinor! Here to you-know-it. :wink: First of all, I'm going to thank you for the request and apologize in advance if ever you might see this review vague ...

Hello there! Here as requested. :3 First of all, I thank you for the request and don't worry, you can always ask a review from me. And I think it's ...

Hello there, Jalmoc! Here as requested. :3 Seeing those previous reviewers above me have pretty covered up those errors I've also noticed, I think it's not needed for me to ...

Hi there, SilentRain! This is really good. The flow, rhyming and everything seems to be emotional but in a good way. What I like in this poem is how you've ...

Hello there, RedLeaf! I'm here to you-know-it. :3 First of all, I thank you for the reviews and I think you deserve to be reviewed back. :3 Repetition: This has ...