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Heya, Idk if it's good to call this a review, maybe just a comment on here. First of all, I am so shocked reading this: our world is awfully evil ...

Heya, Rubes here with a quick review. I could relate to every line. It was very well written too by the way. The whole thing easily flowed ; this piece ...

Wow!! Awesome poem to start with. The stanzas are a perfect length, it doesn't get boring and makes you honestly question, Who am I? The lines are spaced perfectly, where ...

Hey, Ruby here with a short review, WWW (What Went Well): I love the fluidity of your writing, the stanzas can be easily read from one another with breaths taken ...

Hey, Ruby with a short review, WWW (What went well): - The rhyming is great - Easy and joyous to read EBI (Even Better If): - MORE...I need more - ...

Hey, Ruby here with a short review. I love the use of your stanza length. It makes it feel short, sad and panicked (if that makes sense lol) and it ...

Hey, Ruby here with a short review. I'm tearing up reading this ; the short and fluent vibe you present is extremely beautiful. You see, I can imagine this happening, ...

Hey, here with a quick review. I love the clear message in bold, it gives an end effect which I very much enjoyed. I also loves the short and snappy ...

Wow, for a start that was amazing ; great effort for your first sonnet indeed. I may not be able to give the best critic, I am not very familiar ...

Oh wow...that hit close to my heart. Living with that ongoing sadness, breakdowns and anxious overthinking, that hit quite hard. Your writing ability is amazing, the fluidity is gorgeous and ...

Hey, great poem! You have a talent for writing - as we can see here. The flow is amazing and the end line "This is it" sent chills down my ...

Hey, I've read your piece and would love to leave a review. Your vocabulary choice is great! I can visualize the room so effortlessly due to the figurative devices that ...