Yasi17

For a beginner it's really good, in my sense it is more a wise word than a poem and I love it...very beautiful use of words and sentences are well ...

Brilliant poem and words well said and thought of. " if the art of comparing ideas Was like black inked rains, I'd be the rebel Or the villain that floats ...

A beautiful piece of work and i must admit that it has a great structure and is well set out and words well used. Written by 2 great artists of ...

Beautiful piece of work and has a reference to god which I think could help in anyone's situation. It helps us remember that we need to be more grateful and ...

I read a review on your piece and I must say that I agree with it, I am not sure whether I like the piece or not it is slightly ...

Dearly beautiful and emotions are expressed and show well... All ur words are well used and your work is dearly understandable and forme slightly relatable... Work like this always touches ...

This piece is confusing to a certain sense...the meaning of it is not clear and out there but it is good and shows much emotions.. Imbguessing that it has something ...

I must say that it is a well written piece and deserves good realization but you should work on your story...the fact that the older girls are not wanted is ...

Wow" in general work that someone can relate to and feel greatly understood is perfection and this piece does allows people to feel like someone else is listening and understanding ...

This is deep and took a lot of effort and shows that u are a good writer...keep up the good work and I think it makes a,or of sense relating ...

Good job