Yanni1995

A nice poem albeit creepy but I think it did the trick. I hope your stalker is reading this so he knows what's gonna happen to him. Anyway, bits and ...

Grass is prickling at my feet, my thoughts are restless in the heat. I want to be the rushing creek, without a care of what I seek... - I love ...

I like the meaning behind the piece although getting to the grammatical parts of it the whole thing doesn't really make sense. The structure is well, actually there isn't any. ...

Dear Whoever, Mia signed me up for counseling at the school. She tells me it’s for my own good, and for my mental health, but I think it’s just because ...

Winding roads lined with trees glare at me as I drive. I wish their branches would reach out and grab me, drag me away from my destination. But they don't. ...

This was a really heartfelt piece. I love the way you wrote it but now to point out your mistakes. Silent tears fell from my eyes, dripping down onto my ...

I can't hack this water straight off my back, Take what you say and try to act, Rhutheless and shameless, no more talkin' back, - ruthless Smile in undesputed cover ...

Stupid feelings - I think you should put an exclamation point or a period just to prove that you're trying to make a point. I have stupid feelings That come ...

I love it! Simply because it says everything that a teen that parents want to say to their teen children. Happy Birthday, my child! You’re now officially a teen. And ...

So, this looks like it was written out of boredom. Anyway, let's get on with it. His little legs go swish swish swish as he tries to stay afloat, I ...

This is a very good piece. It was well written but the rhyming scheme is really off. In my opinion you should try to write poems that give a specific ...

I loved it. The story is awesome but I have one thing to point out. Lose of a family member or job? - this should be loss for the past ...

I love the story behind it. but i have a few things to point out. Some where there’s always a desire hidden - 'somewhere' should be one word A wish ...

Gray morning daylight peers inside the dim apartment with beaten walls and cold floorboards. An echoing hollow silence interrupts a family game of tag-your-it across the street. A tall man, ...

You're write when you said you need help with your grammar. And I'm just the girl you need. I love the story but there are quite a few mistakes that ...