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As said before this poem has a really good rhyme scheme and the message that you are trying to implement is not one I have seen all over this site. ...

Hello, how are you hope you are well. It's an alright prologue but I feel that the story needs a little more Pizzaz or ''originality''. The story seems similar to ...

This is a minor grammatical error such as ; "because the hardest thing moving forward." I would like to know what this means? I love this poem its really strong. ...

This seems a little generic in my opinion. when you write you want to have a little bit more originality. there is some bad grammar at the top, for example, ...

This is a great poem. You did a good job interpreting your dreams into poem form. I have a lot of dreams about romance and girls. Maybe this is because ...

This is honestly an okay poem. stanza form and The grammar is alright. if there are characters you need to show'em and the audience needs more light. The connection between ...

This is a pretty nice short story. There needs to be a little more detail. In my opinion, the story rushes a little too fastly to the action. This short ...