When it says "her smile a sun kissed watermelon" does that mean its pink or is it green? Sorry if that is a dumb question, i was just curious. I like this poem, Its nice, i Would like to see a windmill. And have the breeze in my hair. I live in NY so we have alot of wind but ive never really taken the time to feel it. <3
This is a great poem.
You did a good job interpreting your dreams into poem form.
I have a lot of dreams about romance and girls.
Maybe this is because I'm lonely, maybe not.
at the end of the poem, you spoke with the uncertainty that is common with
a dream; you know what happened but the roles are not remembered exactly.
Hi! This isn't a review, but just a short comment- I love this so much.
I can really feel the emotions behind this poem and imagine myself in this exact situation.
Thank you so much for sharing this poem! It's great, really. You should be proud of it.
hi its uwubamba! trying a review...lets hope it works.
i love this poem. the sentimentality is amazing. the imagery makes me want to fall for her too. the structure is wonderful and i love the addition of the photo at the end, it really takes it to a new level and helps along the imagery. short, sweet and perfect.
i love this poem 
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