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Oooh, so it was just a dream. Nice twist! I'm really enjoying this so far, it's intriguing and unique. Everything's great, I wouldn't change a thing, had this been my ...

Very interesting and unique. My only thing is "wee gee board" should be "ouija board." Other then that and it being pretty short, this chapter was great. Great job and ...

Still totally in love with this!!!! I can't wait to read more, so please let me know if you write more. Just like every other chapter, I can't find any ...

Beautiful job, I really enjoyed this! The descriptions and wording were wonderfully done. Well done my dear, great job and good luck on your future writes.

I really liked this. It's beautifully written yet simple. I love the emotion that just seems to flow along with the words. Great job and good luck on your future ...

I liked this one, it's nice and simple yet holds true emotion. It doesn't really have much imagery, which I usually look for in a good poem, but it's still ...

I really liked this, it had nice imagery, wording and descriptions. It painted a clear and vivid picture in my mind so great job on that. Anyways, wonderful job and ...

seriously loved this! I can so relate but really this was a wonderful write. The emotion was so evident in all the words it practically jumps out at you. Anyways ...

Oooh, I like this!!!! It's really good and makes you think. Great job and good luck on future rights.

This seems interesting but it kind of reminds me of The House of Night Series. I don't know, it may just be me. But I do think this sounds like ...

I don't really like rhyming all that much, but this was actually pretty good. I can deffinitely relate to this easily. Great job and good luck on future writes.

Short, sweet, and to the point. It really makes you think. I liked this, great job and good luck with future writes.

Very nice, I can really relate to a few things in here. I suggest you go through and edit what can be made better but other then that I loved ...

I really liked this, it was very well written and the imagery and metaphors were great. This is something I've dealt with, with my older half sister, so I can ...

I liked this is was very well written. Some of it sounded a bit forced but over all I think it worked out pretty nicely. Good job, and keep up ...