Shallow Waters

by ShadowKnight155

Published April 11, 2011

In Poems(Good)

I see beauty in the sky
I see beauty in the deep oceans
I see through the deep fogs,
through the shallow waters,
through you.

and,
is there a difference?

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Just a quick little thing, ;D.

EDIT: Is there a way I can preserve white space(multiple spaces)? Curse you browsers and your HTML parsing! There's some stuff that's not spaced as I'd like! :P

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XxjustmeXx
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XxjustmeXx commented Comment · Apr 12, 2011

Short, sweet, and to the point. It really makes you think. I liked this, great job and good luck with future writes.

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MangoTango
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MangoTango wrote a review Review · Apr 11, 2011

Simple, but makes the mind work. I like those kinds of poems, ones that make me think. I think it's great! Maybe the extra "enter" is unnecessary because one could just go like this:

[b]--[b] and is there a difference?

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Arcticus
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Arcticus commented Comment · Apr 11, 2011

It's very simple (and that ain't bad). One Idea, that's all. How can one review that? :)

Keep it up, anyways..



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