I see beauty in the sky
I see beauty in the deep oceans
I see through the deep fogs,
through the shallow waters,
through you.
and,
is there a difference?
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Just a quick little thing, ;D.
EDIT: Is there a way I can preserve white space(multiple spaces)? Curse you browsers and your HTML parsing! There's some stuff that's not spaced as I'd like! ![]()
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Short, sweet, and to the point. It really makes you think. I liked this, great job and good luck with future writes.
Simple, but makes the mind work. I like those kinds of poems, ones that make me think. I think it's great! Maybe the extra "enter" is unnecessary because one could just go like this:
It's very simple (and that ain't bad). One Idea, that's all. How can one review that?
Keep it up, anyways..