XxPheonixKittenxX

Hi! Kitten here for a sincere review! Here to help make this FANTASTIC piece better for you! As there were not many mistakes I could find, (I'm only in 9th ...

Alecsander here for a review. I would love to get straight into the review if we could. The first thing I noticed was the first sentence. "I got into the ...

Hello, this is Alecsander for a review. I usually go by Kitten, but for now on, I'll be going by Alecsander. I did indeed love your story. It was, a ...

Hey there! Kitten here for a review! So there are mistakes. I will explain what it is, and hopefully this helps you in the long run of the story writing! ...

Hey there! Kitten here for a review! So i loved this. I really did. It was an amazing piece. There wasn't really anything wrong with it, besides where you used ...

Hello! Kitten here for a review. As I was reading this, I found this an AMAZING piece. Nothing was really to be fixed. You did such an amazing job. I ...

Hey there it's Kitten for another review! I did see a few mistakes that were very noticeable. Nothing big, so here we go! ",lacing a hand around her daughter under ...

Hey there! Kitten here for a review! So there are a few things I noticed. Not a lot don't worry :) "If she starts screamin' " you need a comma ...

Hey there! Kitten here for a review! "Her jeans had ripped to reveal bruised and bloodied" This is really something like an "either or" mistake. It'll make more sense if ...

Hey there! Kitten here for another review! So first off, "a little bit in the time we were together…? " you don't really need the word "little" in the sentence. ...

Hello! It's Kitten here for a review! So first off, {and that he would hate the fact that she pitied him.} You really do not need to have "the fact ...

Hey there! It's kitten for a review! So there wasn't much wrong with this besides four simple mistakes. "He felt the thuck of his feet touching new ground. " By ...

Hi there! It's Kitten here for a review! So first off, "A couple years ago, I noticed a stray mutt running around the woods near out house. " It was ...

Hey there! XxPheonixKittenxX here for a review! (yes I know I spelled "Phoenix wrong. It's on purpose) There were a few things I noticed. There was only like One misspelled ...

I love this! Wow! You really made all this up on your own? Great Job! Please keep making those up! You're really good at this! You should so do an ...