Young Writers Society

I read your title and thought this was going in a completely different direction. I applaud you for taking this side we don't talk about often and, well, talking about it. In a very powerful way. Weeellll, onto the review.
~ I thought it was a bit too long for a poem. Of course, there are long poems, but I feel like with what you're writing about and your abrupt, fierce ending "Because I'm not/ So stop" it would be better suited to be cut down. Maybe a little less about the childhood? I don't know. Whatever you think will make it work.
~ I loved the repetition. I often do that as well and I think that it was quite powerful. The repetition of "The same way" at the end kicked my ass. And the "Shame on me" -- the reader could feel the sarcasm dripping out of that. This is not your fault and people are making it out to be and honestly there's nothing wrong but people can't see that? I love it. Love it love it love it. I saw a lot of "There's no" which worked well.
~I think this could be really powerful. Like, really freaking powerful. And I know this part is hard, I really do. But you have so much anger and so many words that this really feels like a rant. Feeling your anger is good. But we are not your friends who totally get you. We are the outsiders who are trying to peer into your world and to do this we must see you, at your fullest, crying out in outrage in a clear, concise way.
I don't know if that made sense and I really hope I did not offend with that last comment.
Overall this was really quite good. You have a talent for this.
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Let start with the negative part. It is repetitive, that I did see. I counted at-least three uses of never and four uses of 'shame'. Stylistic choice or just lack of vocabulary (you choose !) ? For the rest I thought it was a bit too long and maybe too wordy to be a proper poem. Use more analogues and metaphors, that helps. Try to be shorter - people are keen to stop reading if they think it is too long, and trust me, they often do. For the rest - the emotion is conveyed, but like I said - too wordy means it doesn't hit strong. It does have some nice imagery though, try to cling on to that. Show, not tell. In a poem that works even more, since people are going to like a hard-hitting short read better than something that conveys its emotions well but is a ton to read. IMHO, of course, feel free to put me into ignore mode if you feel like it. I liked the ending though, body positivity ftw. And the thing I didn't get was - is this girl bulimic or does she have some other problem ? Isn't clear at all. Maybe you can convey it, like I said before, through metaphors and shorting of the text. Cut a few things here and there, make it sound less repetitive (or choose one word that echoes through the whole thing - makes for an awesome effect, really like it) and you will have one gemstone of an poem.

Hello! Kitten here for a review.

As I was reading this, I found this an AMAZING piece. Nothing was really to be fixed. You did such an amazing job. I really hope you do more poetry in the future. This was an excellent poem. Just wanna say, great job, it was fantastic, and I hope that you do lots more in the future.

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Have a fantastic Day!