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Whoa. this is actually quite interesting. grammar is in red . I am just confused about a few things. I stood in the middle of the storm, wind whipping the ...

I feel it. The eyes of society watching my every move. Even when I'm alone, the pressure haunts me. They follow me. No matter where I am or what I'm ...

Hello, Nice work! Just a few suggestions. 'We are now in the forest of a small, uncharted island. We hope to find people to study today.'- Dr. Cheryl Pasternak I ...

Quick run through. this is actually good. Just a few suggestions. ( i am in no way trying to force you into anything/rewrite your work, i just review better when ...

I just edited what i could see, since you wrote a lot. Just to make it a little smoother. Prologue How many moments in your life can you say "this ...

Prologue Everyone alive has a life of some extent . - This seems a bit redundant. What are you trying to say exactly? It is obvious that those who are ...

Really good poem. short, but emotional. ( i hope this isn't a true story) Scarlet lines trimmed with pink, Leaking upon snow white skin, Scar rimmed patterns on an ice-rink, ...

I think this is a lovely piece of poetry. I like how in the end, it turns out that you are the cause of your own suffering. You could learn ...

First off, let me start by saying Welcome to YWS" and all that comes with it.. This piece of literature has a lot of grammatical errors, but fear not! For ...

Nic epoem, just a few things. I lie in wait for I know my fate when I return to the skies they will surely see through my lies my wings ...

Speaking on just a Literature perspective, this is a very good poem. I saw the spoiler, but i am still confused as to what you area trying to get across ...

Really good! Just a few things. Walking down a road, People watching me. Wishing for my abode , - Here, know what you are trying to say, but when you ...

Nice poem. i love it. Good Job! Just a few grammatical/structural revises. Ever wish you could start again ? Flick a switch, Forget the pain you don't need to add ...

My favorite part.- Just put me in a pet carrier. Because a lion without his roar is no lion at all. I like this. It is short and snippy, but ...

Eyes telling no untruth, Seeking out no flaws, my impurities Only friendship, my trust More so than a human. No pig in a poke In those understanding eyes. Nothing to ...