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This is really short, but even so, it's really beautifully written. I do agree with KatyaElefant in what she says about imagery. This is a complete fantasy style piece, and ...

Okay, thanks for leaving a review and the details I can improve on! I hope you continue to read and help point out what's wrong!

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Okay, I was kind of confused for the whole entire story. However, I did read what you said at the end and I understand you were just trying to get ...

Thank you, and I will say that I think I do need some help writing this. What has happened is, if you people weren't aware, I've already written up to ...

Thanks! Yeah, I think I'll make an edited version of this later on. There wasn't really much of a meaning, to be honest. I think that if there was a ...

No problem, keep up the good work!

This is really good. This isn't really much of a review though because I couldn't find anything wrong with the poem. I really like how you tied three different concepts ...

I have noticed.

Friend friend friend. You poor troubled friend. You deserve a lollipop for your tragedies.

Wow, I can't believe I said your instead of you're. I'm one of those people who is always aggravated by how people will mix them up... Anyway, thanks!

Thank you!

Your welcome! It really is a lovely poem and I'm shocked it hasn't gotten a lot of views.

Thank you so much! I will take that epigraph thing into consideration!

Thank you! In this poem, I consider myself more of the first girl, the "average" one who everyone considers crazy and doesn't think much of her. Though I usually hold ...

Any time!