WrittenInStone

Wow, this was a really great read. I've just been minding my own business when suddenly I came across your piece of work and I loved it! This character, Violet ...

Wow, that was brilliant. There's not much to critique on it and the way you placed each stanza as a haiku it was really creative. I don't remember reading a ...

O.O Hiya, Written here. When I read your poem I absolutely fell in love with it. Honestly, I came here to give you a review and I will : I've ...

Written here, come to give you a review :) Alright, once reading your poem I could understand what you meant by having to deny everything you stand up for just ...

Hiya, Written here. Right at the moment the first thing that comes to mind after having read these poems is Wow. *Shakes head.* just wow. Your first poem Bleeding Heart, ...

Hiyya, Written here, or Stone - as some call me. I'm here to review this piece of work that you've called Encore. So, I'm a little short on time at ...

Hello there, Written here, or Stone, as some call me. I read this poem and I was honestly - well I can't say shocked - how about ... in love ...

As most have said, your repetitive use of the noun 'I' is quite tiresome and grows weary as the poem goes on. I can see that this poem could have ...

Wow, this was simply a beautiful poem . Every word was sown together in a tapestry worthy of praise. The emotions in this poem were exceptional, If I decipher correctly ...

The narration was good, quite a few gramatical errors but I'm too tired to point them out at the moment. I will some other time, sorry. Otherwise, there was one ...

Time to begin, Lo! for what did fate befall this man whose own kin made him thrall to make him pay for his own thoughts, his guardian angels for him ...

The demon wailed, “He has a plan! He’s got a life for you, you foolish man! I have to say that this was honestly my favorite stanza, I'm not entirely ...

"You sound like the music," I screamed, "So loud I can hear the conductor trip on a note and swallow a fly. Taste it with your tongue, you are the ...

I agree completely with your previous reviewer, Wicked. I loved this song, it was the exact epitome of what society should be and it flowed well with a great rhythm. ...

Wow, Dragon :) This was a wonderful poem, if you did this when you were bored I wonder what you can write when you aren't. I could actually feel quite ...