Live It Up

My general impressions for this that it was very cool and entertaining to read.
I suck at checking grammar like other critts do so I didnt bother.
The theme is the most important ingrediant in a song, or thats atleast what I think. Your theme was perfect.
I also really enjoyed the rhyming and the rythem.
Maybe next time do a bit linger. Thats it for me

I agree completely with your previous reviewer, Wicked. I loved this song, it was the exact epitome of what society should be and it flowed well with a great rhythm. I'm not sure what kind of rhythm you'd had but it was well written. No gramatical errors and it was just wonderful. However, I do think that you shouldn't have it all broken up like that, you should only break it at the chorus if there is one. It would make it much easier to know what is repeated and what is part of something else. Otherwise, great work.

Wisp.

wickedwonder wrote:What is with Society?
Telling you what to do, who to be?
Why can’t they just see
I’m gonna be me?

Live it up a little bit
Don’t be the silent one in the crowd
Live it up a little bit
Be loud, be proud

They know you’re not that type of girl
They know you’ll be who you want to be
So, get up
Show them who you really are

Live it up a little bit
Don’t be the silent one in the crowd
Live it up a little bit
Be loud, be proud

When life gets tough, just shout it out
There’s no mistake with that
When life gets tough
You know what to do

Live it up a little bit
Don’t be the silent one in the crowd
Live it up a little bit
Be loud, be proud

Just be who you want to be.