WritingWolf

This is amazing. Good job. I do believe that you wanted there to be an I in here "but how can when everywhere" And you forgot the space between "can" ...

This has a nice feel to it. Just a little short. I can see that demib has already gotten to the typos; so I'm not going to bother with that. ...

I really liked this. No, I really, really, really, liked this. It was a very moving piece. I don't know anything about war, or rebuilding a county from ruins. For ...

This is a very interesting piece. Myself, I'm not entirely sure if I agree with or not. It surly gets me thinking about guessing. But really the only things I ...

This was really lovely. I have to say I agree with you. The only thing I'd add if I where to write something like this is that, in a way, ...

I understand how your poem could relate to fear of what you don't understand; but you don't mention it in the actual poem, the only reason I reached that conclusion ...

Hi there Panda! You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes... "'Dav I know that you don't like your grand father. But do this for me 'Dav's mom burst with ...

That's an interesting question... Myself, with things like this, I tend to go and look at how something would have developed on an evolutionary path, why would we have needed ...

Well, I can see that everyone else has already got pretty much everything. The only thing I can say is that I'm still confused about whether or not Medo and ...

I have to agree with wheretwoworldstouch, this is quite intense(and I like it!). And you put a comma in this sentence, "There are forces in existence that are so inexplicable, ...

Good job VimesyPumpkin! I didn't see vary much to critique I think its a little odd how some of the lines are really long, and others really short. It would ...

This is really good. You have a few spelling errors, but not vary many; I don't have time right now to go though and point them out. I also noticed ...

WOW! this is really cool! I just wanted to say that before getting on to the critique, so... I'm not sure(I should probably look it up), but when writing a ...

Vary well written, with a good voice. You may get a few more view if you post in smaller bursts. The length can be quiet intimidating to some. I didn't ...

I have to say this is a vary interesting pice. At the beginning I thought I'd have pity for the speaker after reading this. In the middle I didn't like ...