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Again, this is really good. I caught a few spelling errors like Cody said "of couse' instead of "of course", but this was really neat. It's really frightening to see ...

I don't know much about play-writing, but I really liked this! It was really interesting and it made you think. My only suggestions are that you write more of it ...

Thank you so much for your suggestions. I value them a lot

I know this is really long, but I would really like some good criticism here to make it the very best it can be 'cause this poem means a lot ...

My personal favorite was the Legend of Luke... don't know why

Eh, it was pretty good. Wasn't great, but it was amusing in my opinion. You had some good stanzas and words, but it could use some work...

I thought this was ok. It was really depressing in my opinion and I think it could use some light at the end, but it was pretty good. Also, in ...

I really liked this. It was very pretty and sweet. I wish I could give you some tips, but I can't think of any right now. I'll tell you if ...

I added a little and attempted to make the meaning more clear. Thanks for your comments everyone :wink:

Yeah, it was supposed to leave hanging a little... kind of wanting to know more. ohhewwo: Yeah, I've tried my hand at fantasy before and I love it, but as ...

Here's some crit... I don’t really know how to feel you, but maybe by feel I mean show you how I feel, I’ve already touched you, and kissed you, like ...

Yes, Tamora Pierce's Trickster books were beautiful. I didn't like the second one as much as the first one, but it was still good. My favorite character was Fesgao.

All right, I revised it attempting to use all your suggestions, though it was impossible to use all of them.

*smiles* If you were going to irony, it most certainly worked! Another good job to you...

Thank you so much, guys!!!! This is probably the most feedback I've gotten on a poem and I really, really, REALLY appreciate it!!! Thanks for pointing out that part about ...