Wordzyy

Hey, lives! THis haiku is beautiful, I got a pleasant picture in my head. The syllables are perfect. You started with describing the situation then you state, why so. Really, ...

"She stands motionless on the black volcanic sand fearlessly facing the boisterous surge of the emerald sea." The narrative start hooked me in, quite an imagery for the the waves! ...

Few words with great muse. A haiku about being compassionate and loving, I liked it. It is rare to find that personality in this contemporary world. It is to be ...

Felt proud living here by reading this poem.Good choice of vocabulary to describe "God's Universe" The picture I got was so pleasant in my mind. "Globular clusters Chandeliers of Jehovah ...

Oh my God, it was so amazing. Especially, these lines: "Why is it that you always want me gone? The day will come when you have finally won, and I ...

Hey there!! Your poem has beautifully portrayed the picture of betrayal. Especially, the line "Like every other girl" grasps the theme of the poem. The words were of good flow. ...

Hey there!! This poem stirred up my nostalgic memories as a kid. The theme is relatable to each and every person. The nervousness in addressing yourself to a kid in ...

Wow! I got goosebumps reading this poem. Especially, the last stanza did something to me. Your poem laid am emphasis on father's love. I felt the love the speaker has ...

WOW! I love this poem. I am breaking my head to get a rhyme-scheme like this. I feel the pain in your poem, I liked how you compared the fall ...

Thanks for sharing this poem. It was amazing. I could see your natural flair for poems. I could get a theatrical picture in my head, it was indeed adventurous :) ...

Hi! This is one great poem expressing gratitude. It conveys a great message, even for little things you have it is bestowed articulated, thank him. People tend to lack in ...

This was an amazing read. What I liked the most is the tone of your poem, it is flourished with confidence. Confidence is the one which makes anything so damn ...

This is one great start: "Beyond the dark awaits eternal life. Beyond despair resides a promised hope. I will not quiver nor recoil in fright." It speaks umpteen ideas. I ...

This is another great poem. Your keen observation is what makes your poem lively, it was well seen through these lines: "Silently it stares before it dives. then shattering the ...

I am a squeamish but, tried to watch that video, can't stand more than !:40 min. Your poem speaks humanity isn't dead in each and every line. It's to be ...