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Wondergirl59

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In just a few years

    My thoughts are wish wash. It was good, but could be great. Like another said, too conversational for a poem. You have great ideas, and I see where you want ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The List, #071: The True You

    This is madness. It's crazy. IT'S SO GOOD! I absolutely love it. It's deep and dark and scary and soooo good! I don't know what it is about it that ...

    Mar 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death

    OMFG. (can I say omfg here? oh well.) Times the word "love" by 13.7 billion, and you'll get close to how much I loved this. It was really awesome. I ...

    Mar 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Cheat Death

    Death is such a one-sided argument. We have no say, no choice in when to go. To live is to die and to die is to live. This was okay, ...

    Mar 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: As if I Never Existed

    Trying to break my own knife, and failing to dust my lost pen. This was confusing to me . To write this pain, that's so hard to swallow, This doesn't ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: When The Tables Are Turned

    MY GOSH! I just read your other piece (that was so cute!) and now hear I am writing this by coincidence. I really, really like the titles, that's what caught ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Morgan's Lullaby

    Hey Matt!! Okay, so the poem was super sweet!! It was totally cute and it had an awesome flow to it. It WAS really relaxing to read. Great job, love. ...

    Mar 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Paolo

    Still trying to figure out if this has a deeper lying message, or if you just really like moose. It read. It's not falling-of-a-bike funny, it's picture-falling-off-wall funny. I think. ...

    Feb 27, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: Trying to Define Art

    I could say this was great but... That would be the under statement of infinity. Seriously, can anyone say this was bad. In such a short writing, I don't ever ...

    Feb 23, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Error 401

    Oh Em Gee this is way awesome. I love the quote from error 401 at the beginning. It's way cool. Awesome job!!! :D :D :D

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Needle in the Haystack

    Hey, saw the title of your piece. I don't know why, it just really attracted me. I was drawn. Needle in a haystack always fascinated me. It seems so absurdly ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Hieroglyphs

    This is really good. I'm not great at poetry, but I know this was a good one. I think the last line adds the final touch of effect to the ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: She Wonders Sometimes.

    It's short, but pretty meaningful and powerful. It makes you wonder what really did happen to her, and what is to come for her. I like the last line, because ...

    Jan 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Stupid America

    This is one of those moments where crickets go off in the background. I'm stunned. In a good way. I 100% Agree with you on every word you said. I ...

    Jan 3, 2011
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: 101 Things I Want to Do before I Die

    Cross # 100 off your list. Obviously, people have read this. This is awesome. My mom laughed at me when I made my bucket list. But ya never know, I ...

    Jan 2, 2011


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