Wonder

I'm not going to review, just comment. Beautiful. Beautiful beautiful beautiful! I love it! If it's okay, can I show this to my friends at school? (They aren't poets, but ...

Thank you! :D Rhyming, for me, is e best part when I write my poems. ;)

Okay, thank you. =^-^=

Thank you! :D

Thank you. :3 The sunrise is pretty, too, but were I live, the sunset is much more magnificent. Thanks for the review!

I know, it's really short... But I really didn't want this poem to be more than five stanzas long, so I guess I could've written more. I'll work on making ...

Interesting... Haha I started laughing halfway through. ;) Nice job, I liked it. - Wonder

WOAH. This gave me the shivers! :P Nice job!

Beautiful. I was totally moved by this poem, and I can imagine the girl the narrator loves. I love it! - Wonder

I love this poem! It's so cute! :3 I love how simple yet happy it is. Nice job with the rhyming, too. Again: I love it!!! :D -- Wonder

Okay, thank you! :) I'll go fix it right now. -- Wonder

Thank you! And by the way, here's a little secret: I never meant to have that perfect/imperfect rhyming pattern. :P Thanks again, Wonder

Nice job! I love it! No grammar mistakes -- whoopee! :D I'm totally intrigued and hooked. And by the way, is Lana a boy or a girl? I've been assuming ...

I love it. I can really relate to this, which is what I like. It's full of pain, it speaks of it again and again and it's beautiful. I really, ...

Wow, I really love how this poem/song evokes feeling. Keep up the good work! I was singing this out loud, and my little sister came up to me and said ...