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Re: In the Midst of Darkness
This poem is brilliant. I have a tendency to write poems about my emotions and night or darkness, but this is way better than any of mine. It flows quite ...
Nov 25, 2013 -
Re: Move with the Beat! Be Free!
Hello, I love when poems are written this way simple and short. I can't remember what they are called but I wrote a bunch of them for school a few ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: tired
Hi, Your poem is quite well thought out and seems to tell a story or a persons train of thought. I think that many can relate to it I know ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: Don't use love as an alibi
This is quite a nice poem. I like the way it tells a lovers story, and I can relate to it quite well with my current crazy relationship. The way ...
Nov 24, 2013 -
Re: The Girl Who Never Smiled
Wow, that is amazing. I just pretty much cried. I love how much emotion you put into this story. In the beginning it seems sad but then like things are ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Such A Beautiful Nightmare
Hello, I love the way your poem flows smoothly. {which mine seem to have a problem doing sometimes} You really capture the unfulfilled desire that many people get from there ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: Chapter one Soul Wolf
Hello, I love to write stories! I like were your story is going. I think its cool that each tribe member has a soul beast. {Not exactly sure what that ...
Aug 14, 2013 -
Re: I need to write.
Hello, I really like what you did with your poem. To me the italicized words are like your mind trying to help you sort out how you feel and what ...
Aug 9, 2013 -
Re: -
I like the way you symbolized the tree as possibly a person. Its a cute poem, you could revise it a little but it flows off the tong well to ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: Trust, Truth, and Trying
Wow, I love the way your poem has trust as a physical being. Its really nice that it has a little bit of a rhyme to it and it kinda ...
Jul 10, 2013
