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Well, I agree with kitty15 on the punctuation and the imagery. It's a very overdone/cliched theme, but that doesn't bother me. This poem tells the truth and yes, it's simple, ...

Aw, that was cute! :) I must agree about the first sentence though--it kind of runs on for a while. A little girl in a blue dress the deep color ...

It was early morning when Ruki woke up. The sun had just risen up into the sky. There's nothing specifically wrong with these sentences, but I think you could definitely ...

Well, that was...interesting...! It's a little short, so I can't give you an in-depth review. :( However, the rhyming near the end sounds quite bizarre... Well, Cheers to random poem ...

Ok, this is full of grammatical, spelling and spacing errors. :( I re-wrote it below so that it makes sense and has proper punctuation. The things I changed are in ...

Grrrr...maybe I should eat your keyboard, Azila! :P I was going to give you an in-depth review too, but Azila already covered it all. This was really good. You are ...

This is the first story I have writen with an ending, I would REALLY appreciate any input. I have never tried horror before either. She was screaming. It was a ...

Wow. That was really, freakishly good. I could only find one thing that bothered me: The left bed holds a teenage boy, watching a sleeping girl in the adjacent bed. ...

Cool! I liked this. It reminds me of us, and the setting is very similar to my room. And my mom always asks me to go to the candy store ...

Well, I agree with Enchantress and Bella. It's very cliched, what with the rose and death and twisted love and all. Those ideas are just so overused that they don't ...

Peering through the window reflecting your disatisfied self. You look at the manicans admirely and wish to be more skinny. You [s]wach[/s] watch the models go past in (Comment 1) ...

I know this is coming in late in the story, but this is where it actually gets good. This is from my last draft, in the Spring, so it's not ...

I started this review on Saturday (Toronto time) but I'm having friends over later so I probably won't finish it until Sunday. :oops: So, if anyone finishes an in-depth review ...

This isn't my style of poetry, but I thought these were pretty good. Strangely enough, I liked the first one better. Maybe it was because I can't live without description? ...

This is how I would format it if I were you: Oh fear is great Fear is strong It may stop us from doing what's right Or to do what ...