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Meg! I never knew you could write poetry But you can! I love the way you said it would take away everything. I would nit-pick and point out certain bits ...

Meg! Yeah, you shouldn't double post 'n all, but it's okay cause you've only just joined recently. I double - no, quadruple posted on all my topics when I first ...

I'm going to give this a better critique later, but there was something that really, really bugged me. :x This sounds a lot like Twilight. There's the whole Vampire/Werewolf thing, ...

Genevieve! That was beautiful - thank-you! *wipes tear from eye* Now you've inspired me to write a letter to YOU! I love you! :D Narf! -Ayra :)

I agree with Gwen that there wasn't much description. Yes, this was quite a good book, but the lack of figurative speech was [for me] a major drawback. She could ...

sorry this one took so long. writers block had me crippled --------------------------------- Chapter 7 The crowd was rippling with anticipation, seeming to swell with impatience, all around me, excite

The Alchemy Child Prologue The glow of red was the only light in the dark, damp room. The glow came from a circle with complicated lines going through it. A ...

They're okay, I guess. I've read up until 'The Rivers of Zadaa'. I was going to buy the rest but there's something about the author's style that I really hate. ...

Hey Nikki! Before I start the review, I need to tell you this: You should put all your bits in one post. Just click 'Edit'. :} I'm pretty sure there ...

:smt037 Wow, that was incredibly random. I love it. I mean, it didn't make sense, but that's just why it was just so...spectacular. I actually laughed while reading this. Whether ...

That was really good! The rhyming didn't seem forced and it flowed very well, and also, the imagery was excellent. I agree with Jasmine Hart that your first stanza was ...

Ooohhh. I liked this. However, it really is short. I would suggest saving it as a draft until you have a decent length, but maybe that's just me. Anyways. I ...

Now that I've read some of your poetry, I can recognize [to some extent] your style. It tends to be vividly emotional, but you always infer the feeling; you never ...

You know, I always feel really awkward reviewing work done by people older than me, not to mention more experienced than me. But I saw that you won the 'Best ...

This was really good; although you didn't directly express your emotions, there is plenty of feeling in this. I really liked the imagery of the bruised apples and the trees ...