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Re: From Somewhere, There Came a Knocking
The suspense used here is great! A reader really gets anxious to discover what is causing the knocking. You've woven in an element of mystery, and that really catches me.
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: “you’re my world.”
Very inspirational and cute. :) Nice work on keeping the same concept in the second stanza, but applying it to a person instead of nature. Maybe you could find a ...
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: I'm Fine
This is good. I love the depth.
Oct 3, 2019 -
Re: Waiting
This is inspiring. :) Great call to action. Also, nice how it doesn't necessarily say what the specific issue to be dealt with is, so it kind of leaves it ...
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: Flares & Fragments 1.1
Cool idea. Action peaks a little fast, though.
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: friends of my dreams
Really creative. Nice timeline concept. And awesome how it builds up interest and suspense with mythological creatures and then comes back down to a common, everyday pet. :) Hooray for ...
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: You Need to Read This.
Very interesting perspective. The subject isn't necessarily my favorite, but it's handled amazingly. Very good suspense factor.
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: The Lump Of Clay
Some good thoughts going on here.
Oct 2, 2019 -
Re: one last card game
AHHHH! This is amazing and it makes me want to cry!! Awesome work.
Oct 2, 2019