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Re: The Vampire And The Mortal (Chapter 1)
Hello! Have a review of your first chapter. Overall, it feels a bit unpolished, but I like the concept of your protagonist living in a vampire slaying village while, quite ...
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Re: A Testament in Frost and Hail
Hello! I thought you might like a review, so here goes. This poem relies heavily on sensory imagery and extended metaphors. It's buitl almost entirely out of rhyming couplets (yore/before, ...
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Re: Corpus coloseum (ft a bonus poem)
Hello there! That's a pretty cool poem. It's an interesting take on arbitraty boxes we divide things by - something the human brain does quite naturally to make sense of ...
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Re: Houseflies
Hello! I just came across your poem, and I have to say: well done! I like it a lot. I'll answer your questions first, then add my own observations, okay? ...
Mar 10, 2026 -
Re: Clown and Killer’s daughter
Alright, so I'm the first to admit I know not a whole lot about creepypasta (aside from Ben Drowned, which gave me nightmares), but I figured I could give reviewing ...
Mar 10, 2026 -
Re: Older
Ohhh, this is a lovely poem! I'll give analysing it a try, yeah? And give you a review of sorts. It's in free verse, and it only rhymes sometimes (feather/weather, ...
Mar 9, 2026 -
Re: Blue Hour
Hello! This is my very first review, and English is not my first language, but I just love poetry so I'll try my best! I really like this poem. Though ...
Mar 9, 2026
