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Willowsong

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Vampire And The Mortal (Chapter 1)

    Hello! Have a review of your first chapter. Overall, it feels a bit unpolished, but I like the concept of your protagonist living in a vampire slaying village while, quite ...

    Mar 12, 2026
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: A Testament in Frost and Hail

    Hello! I thought you might like a review, so here goes. This poem relies heavily on sensory imagery and extended metaphors. It's buitl almost entirely out of rhyming couplets (yore/before, ...

    Mar 12, 2026
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Corpus coloseum (ft a bonus poem)

    Hello there! That's a pretty cool poem. It's an interesting take on arbitraty boxes we divide things by - something the human brain does quite naturally to make sense of ...

    Mar 12, 2026
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Houseflies

    Hello! I just came across your poem, and I have to say: well done! I like it a lot. I'll answer your questions first, then add my own observations, okay? ...

    Mar 10, 2026
  • Other » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Clown and Killer’s daughter

    Alright, so I'm the first to admit I know not a whole lot about creepypasta (aside from Ben Drowned, which gave me nightmares), but I figured I could give reviewing ...

    Mar 10, 2026
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Older

    Ohhh, this is a lovely poem! I'll give analysing it a try, yeah? And give you a review of sorts. It's in free verse, and it only rhymes sometimes (feather/weather, ...

    Mar 9, 2026
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Blue Hour

    Hello! This is my very first review, and English is not my first language, but I just love poetry so I'll try my best! I really like this poem. Though ...

    Mar 9, 2026


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