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Re: A Note For a Date
Hey, I'm Willow. Here to spread Joy and wonder. Plus saddness because this is a reveiw. Okay first, the 1st stanza is a little sappy. It's a poem, have a ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: My Goal
Okay, I'm Willow. I'm gonna reveiw your poem a little differently. So, yeah, we'll see if this works. :D I am not exactly great. I like this stanza, it's modest ...
Mar 9, 2013 -
Re: In spite of all that's wicked [II]
Hey, I'm here to reveiw this poem! Yeah, okay... Anyway... First off there's to much ryhming. Ryhming is a tool to enhance the poems, like the cilantro in panang curry ...
Jul 9, 2012 -
Re: An Ode to GRANDPA !!
Hey I read your poem, time to reveiw (by the way I stink at reveiwing so sorry...) The first four lines are nice, they set up the mood of the ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: An Ode to GRANDPA !!
Hey I read your poem, time to reveiw (by the way I stink at reveiwing so sorry...) The first four lines are nice, they set up the mood of the ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: unfolded
I'm going to seperate my reveiw into your sections. By the way I'm not to good at reveiwing, so bare with me... i. I like the metaphor of someone leaving ...
Jun 3, 2012 -
Re: Shadows-Prologue
Okay, good story, but there are a few issues: 1) When a new character speaks, it's a grammical rule that a new paragraph. When it's a bunched up like this ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: Heads or Tails
Holy YETIS! That was great! I like how you explain in the begining the different choices. Showing, intellegently, that there is no real difference between the choices. It really gives ...
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: If I died
I got to say I'm a little confused, but that's a good thing. It makes it stick in your head, so great job. :D
Jun 2, 2012 -
Re: I wish.....
I agree with UpAndOut15, if you're righting a poem you need to have some rhythm. though i don't why in a couple of spots you have lots of question marks ...
Jun 1, 2012