WillowCutz

Hey, I'm Willow. Here to spread Joy and wonder. Plus saddness because this is a reveiw. Okay first, the 1st stanza is a little sappy. It's a poem, have a ...

Okay, I'm Willow. I'm gonna reveiw your poem a little differently. So, yeah, we'll see if this works. :D I am not exactly great. I like this stanza, it's modest ...

Hey, I'm here to reveiw this poem! Yeah, okay... Anyway... First off there's to much ryhming. Ryhming is a tool to enhance the poems, like the cilantro in panang curry ...

Hey I read your poem, time to reveiw (by the way I stink at reveiwing so sorry...) The first four lines are nice, they set up the mood of the ...

Hey I read your poem, time to reveiw (by the way I stink at reveiwing so sorry...) The first four lines are nice, they set up the mood of the ...

I'm going to seperate my reveiw into your sections. By the way I'm not to good at reveiwing, so bare with me... i. I like the metaphor of someone leaving ...

Okay, good story, but there are a few issues: 1) When a new character speaks, it's a grammical rule that a new paragraph. When it's a bunched up like this ...

Holy YETIS! That was great! I like how you explain in the begining the different choices. Showing, intellegently, that there is no real difference between the choices. It really gives ...

I got to say I'm a little confused, but that's a good thing. It makes it stick in your head, so great job. :D

I agree with UpAndOut15, if you're righting a poem you need to have some rhythm. though i don't why in a couple of spots you have lots of question marks ...