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WilliamPaige

WilliamPaige

  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Counting

    This is an incredibly interesting concept. As someone who moved around a lot, I can say this definitely spoke to me. I loved how even the poem went from the ...

    Feb 22
  • Poetry » Politics, Literature Re: Answer me, child

    I adore the concept here, when you write ad though speaking to a arrogant child. You scold the powerful for their ignorance and don't shy to tell them off. I ...

    Feb 22
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: Lost in Translation (An excerpt from the rough draft)

    Good morning, I would like to start by saying you writing style is definitely one of my favorites I have seen so far. The way you write dialogue and scene ...

    Mar 16, 2025
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: And She Shall Rise

    Okay, so I'm coming to this a bit late. I have yet to read your other works, which I assume provides context to this lovely piece of literary art. As ...

    Mar 12, 2025
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Fantasy Re: The Clarksons-Love in decaying hearts

    Okay, wow! This is stunning, I am in awe of your writing style, it is clean and sleek and overall beautiful. I have very few critiques. However one thing that ...

    Mar 7, 2025
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when i ate the mold - I

    I'd like to start by saying this poem really speaks to me in an odd primal way. There is something so soothing in the flow of the lines and the ...

    Mar 3, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Lovely twists~

    The yearning in this poem is so potent it is almost a tangible presences. The simple short sentences mixed with the complex and select vocabulary communicates a deeper understanding to ...

    Mar 3, 2025
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: In music I found you

    This poem captures a feeling almost every music lover has felt at some point in their life. It reflects the powerful effects music can have on the soul. The grammar ...

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Aristocrat, The Bandits, The Chalice. Chapter Two

    Hello, fellow writer!!! I stumbled across this wonderful chapter and felt I needed to offer some compliments. Your work is truly spectacular and I cannot wait to see how the ...

    Dec 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: The Heart's Song and the Brain's Tune

    This is a fantastic poem! Your use of poetry moves each section along by adding fluidity and humor. I particularly love how, as the poem progresses, the heart and brain ...

    Dec 7, 2024


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser