Willard

Wait, refute that, I just didn't use iambic pentameter because I am a rebel and conformity is a way to death. Sorry!

Actually, I refute that, it often varies. I decided not to use iambic pentameter. Sorry!

A draft? Really? I feel somewhat insulted. Thanks for the review!

Spenser sonnet if I recall correctly, which has no iambic pentameter. Thanks for the review!

Alright, there are over five patterns of sonnets, but only one (Shakespearian) uses Iambic Pentameter. This, if I remember correctly, followed Spenser so there's no set rhythm. Syllables that usually ...

Rarely would I think a poem is great, but this is pure gold. I love this.

You said "All of the things". You're telling me writing a generic, non original love poem involving an egotistic narrator, told through "techniques" is a style? Are you serious? Well, ...

That was nowhere near the point of the poem. This doesn't really have that much to do with slavery, but thanks for the review

The worst way to take criticism is to deny it, but alright

tamtam, that was a little bit harsh

I have been sitting on it for a couple of hours and it is official. I love this.

>says something calmly >"DUDE MAN DON'T GET ANGRY" ?

This review

You can't review your own work

Woo!