WhiteTiger93

Correct! He's remembering a past encounter...his only encounter with her, actually. Thank you for the review!

Thank you! Also...yes that was a typo. Oops! How did I miss that? >.< To answer your question, she is not a real angel. This is a rather long story ...

I-I-I can't speak. Too much SEXY-MEGA-FOXY-AWESOME-HOT!!!! I officially love you. Marry me? xDD

Um...guys...this is over a year old....I'm sure Magnus appreciates all the critiques, but it isn't new.

Wow! Thank you both for your critiques. You've both given me a lot to work with! :) What time period is this? This is made in the time period right ...

Thanks everyone! Your reviews are much appreciated! :D I'll try to work on the punctuation. In fact, I really do see it now as I look it over with. :) ...

Kind of. The boy's soul is the music, hence the pure part. ^_^ So, yes, in a way. His dream is to live a life of beautiful music, that he ...

Hey Pen! Thanks! For Mia I was trying to make her the girl who "everyone is too afraid to actually talk about" y'know? But I see your point, I'll try ...

Alright. I read Twilight about..two maybe three years ago, I believe. I continued the series and just...treated it like any other book. The first time I thought it was okay. ...

At least you made me laugh. (: There is always that. I guess I could say it was...interesting.

Ah. I think I must have misunderstood you. I'm sorry. (: Still, I stick to what I said. It may seem that we have the same opinion...

Thanks everyone. Your reveiws were fantastic. So I'll give you each a thought. Write - You're right. I forgot to put her thoughts in italics. Stupid mistake! Thanks, and I'll ...

Hey, Whitiger here! Well I just so happen to be in this contest as well (: I don't think I'll finish though ): Anyway I thought this was really good. ...

Here I am, as promised (: Well, I would like to say that his was a very interesting piece and it started off this the action right away. Though, it ...

Thanks everyone (: Actually, I didn't want you to care about Kali too much beacuse of the fact that she dies. Later on in the story, you'll see why. I ...