Weymouth

I've explained the meaning of the poem in my reply to Savvy's review below, have a look

You have interpreted this ridiculously well... :) I wanted to see if anyone would actually get it, and i'm glad you did. It's about my ex-girlfriend, whom I still love ...

Wow, i'm really sorry about your friend, and i'm glad I could remind you of him even though you miss him. I know what it's like to miss someone and ...

Was this a reference to the song Awesome to the max by Ephixa? if so, then you sir, are a legend.

What you do is put on the blank line where you want there to be a line break and it will do it for you.

Thank you so much! This review meant a lot to me :) Yeah that whole bit involving the capillaries and spider's web etc. is a rather weak part of this ...

Thank you! I think you're an amazing writer and that makes this review even more awesome :) I'll have a look at the spider's web thing as that has been ...

Wow, that really means a lot to me :) thank you so much!

Thanks :) haha yeah don't worry i'm fine, i wrote this back in january/february time when i was quite a bit more depressed than at present >.< but i appreciate ...

Thank you so much! I'll work on this :P yeah the title i wasnt sure about, and i could only think of titles that had nothing to do with the ...

This is possibly the best review i've ever read :') I think i'm a fan of the point system, i might keep score XD I'm really thankful that you even ...

Thanks so much! The periods are just a way of keeping it in stanzas, if i don't put something there, then it just makes it one long paragraph. I've replaced ...

Haha well I actually listened to that song before i wrote this, probably why I called it Holes :P yeah, if there were anything else with the same meaning that ...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it! :D

Thanks :) yeah it was originally 'needed' but I changed it right before i published it, I wasn't really sure about it. I think i'll just change it back :P