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WeepingWisteria

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  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: robin wings made of wax

    Hello, Mage! I said I would read this poem, and here I am! And may I say, it didn't disappoint. First, I adore using Greek myth as metaphors (most recognizably ...

    Sep 5, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: god's failed creations

    Hey, Mage! Wist here with a quick review of this beautiful piece. :D To start with, I want to say how much I adore this piece. I had the pleasure ...

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Narrative Re: but i cried 'till it was cold

    Hey, LadyBug! Wist here with a shorter review for you today. I must say, your work did a fantastic job of capturing my attention from the very beginning. The idea ...

    Sep 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Bella, Horida Bella

    Hello! Lorde here with a short review of your work. My Latin's a little rusty, seeing as the Romans fell in 395 AD, and you forget a few things when ...

    Jan 29, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Come Away From the Sea

    Hello! Lorde here with a little review of your poem. It's captivating, and I hope this review is helpful. Let's start with the beginning. You open your story incredibly well. ...

    Jan 25, 2022
  • Short Story » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Please don't be in love with someone else

    Hello, wyd.evie! I'm Lorde. Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy your time here. I know I certainly do. Anyways, I'm here to review your short story. I love the ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Maybe

    Hello, Avis! Lorde here with a short review. This poem's subject is heart-wrenchingly beautiful—the idea of being hurt again and again and loving anyway for hope it will get better. ...

    Jan 20, 2022
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Out of Sight

    Hello! Lorde here with a short review. First of all, I love the air of mystery this poem has. The idea of these flowers blooming along a deep ocean trench, ...

    Jan 17, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Never Again to be Broken

    Hello, Lorde here with a review. I must say, you have done a remarkable job of writing a parallel story, and I couldn't help but gush over it. "She no ...

    Jan 17, 2022
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ...

    Hello, QuoolQuo! I'm here to give you a review on your wonderful short story. First off, I absolutely love your use of repetition in your work. Repetition is one of ...

    Jul 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Not The Best

    Hello, Anne! I'm here to give you a little review. First of all, I love the theme of your poem. The way I've interpreted it is that the gardener represents ...

    Jul 7, 2021
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Song of Stars

    Hello, Lorde here with a review! Now, I’m not sure how you imagine the rhythm, so I’m not focusing on that. I liked how you approached this by comparing a ...

    Jul 6, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Passion

    Wow. This poem is so raw and powerful, I can feel it in my soul. Also, a happy belated welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here; we have ...

    Jul 5, 2021
  • Short Story » Realistic, Satire Re: The NETWORK. the Innominate Nation.

    Hello, JohnKlue. I'm Lord, and I have a short little review for you today. Oh my goodness! This is so fascinating. You immediately drew me in and kept me locked ...

    Jun 26, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Till You Find Your Glow Again

    Hello again, WinnyWriter! This poem is incredibly comforting. It's a gentle reminder that even when you're at your lowest low, there's always going to be someone who will lift you—a ...

    Jun 26, 2021


When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the world wondering how you did it.
— Grace Helbig