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Re: robin wings made of wax
Hello, Mage! I said I would read this poem, and here I am! And may I say, it didn't disappoint. First, I adore using Greek myth as metaphors (most recognizably ...
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Re: god's failed creations
Hey, Mage! Wist here with a quick review of this beautiful piece. :D To start with, I want to say how much I adore this piece. I had the pleasure ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: but i cried 'till it was cold
Hey, LadyBug! Wist here with a shorter review for you today. I must say, your work did a fantastic job of capturing my attention from the very beginning. The idea ...
Sep 3, 2022 -
Re: Bella, Horida Bella
Hello! Lorde here with a short review of your work. My Latin's a little rusty, seeing as the Romans fell in 395 AD, and you forget a few things when ...
Jan 29, 2022 -
Re: Come Away From the Sea
Hello! Lorde here with a little review of your poem. It's captivating, and I hope this review is helpful. Let's start with the beginning. You open your story incredibly well. ...
Jan 25, 2022 -
Re: Please don't be in love with someone else
Hello, wyd.evie! I'm Lorde. Welcome to YWS. I hope you enjoy your time here. I know I certainly do. Anyways, I'm here to review your short story. I love the ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Maybe
Hello, Avis! Lorde here with a short review. This poem's subject is heart-wrenchingly beautiful—the idea of being hurt again and again and loving anyway for hope it will get better. ...
Jan 20, 2022 -
Re: Out of Sight
Hello! Lorde here with a short review. First of all, I love the air of mystery this poem has. The idea of these flowers blooming along a deep ocean trench, ...
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: Never Again to be Broken
Hello, Lorde here with a review. I must say, you have done a remarkable job of writing a parallel story, and I couldn't help but gush over it. "She no ...
Jan 17, 2022 -
Re: ...
Hello, QuoolQuo! I'm here to give you a review on your wonderful short story. First off, I absolutely love your use of repetition in your work. Repetition is one of ...
Jul 7, 2021 -
Re: Not The Best
Hello, Anne! I'm here to give you a little review. First of all, I love the theme of your poem. The way I've interpreted it is that the gardener represents ...
Jul 7, 2021 -
Re: Song of Stars
Hello, Lorde here with a review! Now, I’m not sure how you imagine the rhythm, so I’m not focusing on that. I liked how you approached this by comparing a ...
Jul 6, 2021 -
Re: Passion
Wow. This poem is so raw and powerful, I can feel it in my soul. Also, a happy belated welcome to YWS! I hope you like it here; we have ...
Jul 5, 2021 -
Re: The NETWORK. the Innominate Nation.
Hello, JohnKlue. I'm Lord, and I have a short little review for you today. Oh my goodness! This is so fascinating. You immediately drew me in and kept me locked ...
Jun 26, 2021 -
Re: Till You Find Your Glow Again
Hello again, WinnyWriter! This poem is incredibly comforting. It's a gentle reminder that even when you're at your lowest low, there's always going to be someone who will lift you—a ...
Jun 26, 2021
